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The table below shows employment patterns for males and females in New Zealand in 1993 and 2003.
【主體段分段】：按照 <性別> 分段
Body 1：Men
Body 2：Women
開頭段
The table illustrates changes in the percentage of males and females working in six different industries between 1993 and 2003.
概述段
In both years, maleswere primarily employed inIT, farming, and construction,whilethe top three fields favored byfemales were services, commerce, and manufacturing.Also, female workersoutnumberedtheir male counterparts in commerce and services,whereasthe remaining four sectors saw higher male participation.
思路要點：
- 兩年內，男性工作比例最高的是IT、farming 和building，女性主要在services、commerce 和manufacturing工作
- 兩年內，Commerce和Services工作的女性基本都大於男性，剩下行業規律相反
Body paragraph 1
Clearly, four industriessaw a decline inthe proportion of male employees. Initially, ITtopped the list(80%),followed bythe figures in farming (75%) and building (68%).Subsequently,there was a noticeable dropof roughly 10% in these three figures. The percentage of men working in manufacturingalsodecreased,but only marginally,reaching52% in 2003.In contrast, the proportion of male workers in commerce and services increased.This was particularly true forservices, which, despite beingthe least favorite sectorin 1993,saw its figure more than double to40% by the end of the period.
思路要點：Men
- 有四個行業的男職工比例下降
- 1993年IT資料最高(80%)，farming排第二(75%)，building排第三(68%)；2003年這三個資料都顯著下降了大約10%
- manufacturing資料也下降，但幅度較小，輕微下降到2003年的52%
- commerce、services資料上升
- services資料在1993年最小→2003年上漲2倍多達到40%
Body paragraph 2
However, a different trend emerged inwomen’s employment.Specifically, services and commerce werethe most attractive sectorsin both years,but theirfemale participationexperienced a decrease.Especially, serviceswitnessed a dramatic dropfrom 85% in 1993 to 60% in 2003.Among the other four industries, the most significant increases occurred in IT and farming, where female participation rose by 10% during the period. Manufacturing was the only filed where the proportion of womenremained relatively unchanged, staying stable ataround 46%.
思路要點：Women
- services、commerce兩年資料都最大，但都呈現下降趨勢；services下降急劇，從1993的85%急劇下降到2003年的60%
- 其餘四個行業資料呈現上升趨勢
- IT、farming上升最為顯著（上升了10%）
- 只有manufacturing資料幾乎變，平穩在大約46%
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