February 8, 2024
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[2024/ 2/ 3] The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010.
【主體段分段】：
<方法1>：按時間分段（本篇文章採用此種分段方法）
<方法2>：按數值大小分段
- Body 1：Iceland + Turkey（數值較大）
- Body 2：Australia + Sweden（數值較小）
【開頭段】
The bar chart compares the use of sustainable energy in Australia, Sweden, Iceland and Turkey over the period from 1997 to 2010.
【概述段】
In general, compared with other three countries, Iceland relied more on renewable energy.Also, this is the country where the figure for such energy resourceswitnessed the most dramatic growth.
思路要點：
- Iceland數值始終最高
- Iceland數值變化幅度最大
【Body 1】
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatin the initial year, 45% of the energy in Iceland was from renewable sources, and this figurewas followed bythat in Turkey(38%). Australia and Swedenshared a similar figure, with only roughly 8%.
思路要點：1997年
- Iceland→45%，Turkey→排第二（38%）
- Australia和Sweden→資料相似，約為8%
【Body 2】
In the subsequent years, two countriesexperienced a growth intheir consumption of renewable energy.A drastic rise could be foundin Iceland, with the figure reaching 70% in 2010. The energy consumption in Swedenalsowitnessed an increase, climbing slightly by 2% in the final year.
思路要點：
- 後續年份，Iceland 和 Sweden數值上升
- Iceland：急劇上升到2010的70%
- Sweden：小幅度上升了2%
【Body 3】
However, a different trend could be foundin the use of sustainable energy in other two countries.To be more specific,the period of 13 years(1997-2010) saw a marginal decline inthe consumption of such energy resources in Australia, with the figure of only 5%. The figure in Turkeymodestly rose to its peak at41% in 2000, before falling significantly to 32% in the last year.
思路要點：
- 另外兩個國家資料 呈現不同趨勢
- Australia：小幅度下降
- Turkey：小幅度上升→顯著下降
