February 1, 2024
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[2024/ 1/ 27] The table below shows the percentage of GDP occupied by health spending in 2009.
【主體段分段】：
- Body 1：花費較高的3個國家—France，Germany，USA
- Body 2：花費較低的2個國家—Japan，Italy
【開頭段】
The table compares Japan, Italy, France, Germany and USA with regard to the distribution of GDP to healthcare for the year 2009.
【概述段】
In general, USAhad the largest expenditureon healthcare among all the 5 countries, and it was the only country where the private spendingoccupied a larger share of GDPthan the public spending.
思路要點：
- USA佔比最高
- 只有在USA，private spending> public spending
【Body 1】
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatUSA allocated 40% of its GDP on healthcare,half ofwhich was for private spending,slightly higher thanthe figure for public spending in this country(15%). The proportion of the total cost of healthcare in Germanyranked the second place(35%),closely followed bythat in Germany(30%). The figures for private and public spending in these two countriesshowed a similar pattern,ranging from12%to18%.
思路要點：
- USA：total spending為40%，其中一半是private spending，略微>public spending
- Germany 和France
- 總花費排名第二、第三
- 其餘兩列資料呈現類似規律，數值區間範圍是12%到18%
【Body 2】
By contrast,a smaller percentage of GDP was used for healthcare in Japan and Italy, with the figures of 20% and 25% respectively.To be more specific,Japan allocated 10% of its GDP on public spending,twice the figure forits private spending.In Italy,private and public spendingshared a similar figure, with roughly 10%.
思路要點：
- Japan和Italy在healthcare的花費比例較低，分別是20%和25%
- Japan：public spending是10%，是private spending的2倍
- Italy：public spending和private spending相似，約為10%
